Castle: Knockout

Heart wrenching pain. Betrayal. Forgiveness. Second Chances. Love… So much emotion packed into one fantastic episode. So much so, I don’t even know where to begin. With Rick’s desperate attempts to protect Kate? Roy’s betrayal, or Kate’s forgiveness? I’m simply stunned.

Melanie Atkins

The parts that took my breath away:

• Rick’s deep concern for Kate when she falls back down the rabbit hole of her mom’s case.

• Kate throws herself on top of Rick to protect him when Lockwood’s accomplices throw the flash bangs in the courtroom.

• Jim Beckett goes to see Rick to find out who’s after Kate and asks him to talk her down. Fabulous scene.

• Rick confronts Kate in her apartment, mentions the kiss and the freezer. Emotionally charged incidents they never talked about. He asks her to walk away, to drop the case and stand down. And Kate refuses. She pushes him away again… even though she really doesn’t want him to go. She’s so caught up in the case, so focused, she won’t let anyone stop her crusade to find justice for her mother. Not even Rick.

• Rick’s heart-to-heart talk about his fear for Kate with his mother Martha. He’s a wordsmith, a writer, and he can’t get the words out to say that he loves Kate. But Martha knows. She tells him, “Don’t waste another minute of it.” That scene brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely couldn’t breathe — even when I watched it twice more.

• Kate goes to Captain Montgomery to ask him to kick Rick out of the precinct — and Roy agrees! She’s flummoxed. She really doesn’t want Rick to go… a fact made obvious by the look on her face and her bumbling attempt to question him about it. The thought of working without Rick by her side is a daunting prospect, but she’s so used to pushing people away she doesn’t know how to accept help. Or true love.

• Ryan and Esposito discover the identity of the third cop: Roy Montgomery, their captain. The ultimate betrayal. They’re so stunned, they come to blows over it… and must forgive each other in order to go on.

• Roy’s act of love at the hanger to protect Kate. He has Castle meet him there and orders him to take Kate away before shots ring out. Before Roy gives his life to save her.

• Rick hauls Kate bodily out of the hanger and holding her while she wails. They both know Roy is going to die, and they are powerless to stop it. So heart wrenching.

• Kate’s decision to keep Roy’s betrayal a secret. Only she, Esposito, Ryan, and Castle know the truth. Her eulogy for Roy makes him out a hero, so his family will never know what really happened… so touching.

• Rick’s attempt to save Kate at the cemetery. He’s good, but he’s not fast enough to stop a bullet. He begs her to stay with him, then finally says those three precious words: “I love you. I love you!”

Is he too late? I think not… but we won’t know for sure until the first episode of season four. From what I’ve been able to gather from Twitter, that one will pick up where this one leaves off. My question is: Was Kate wearing a vest? Hmmm…

I love this show. Four months without a new episode. Will I survive it? How many times will I watch the finale over the summer? How many times will I wish for September to hurry up?

Thank you, Will Beall. Thank you, Andrew Marlowe, Nathan Fillion, Stana Katic, Seamus Dever, Jon Huertes, Ruben Santiago-Hudson, Susan Sullivan, and Molly Quinn. What a fantastic finale!!

Okay, enough of the mushy stuff. Lets get to the cop stuff.

Lee Lofland

But, before I do, I feel as if I have to say this…again. We write this part of the review (about the police procedure) merely to point out things that aren’t exactly correct so writers (and others) won’t make the mistake of thinking that’s how things are in real-life. Again, I know the show is fiction. I know it’s not supposed to be realistic. And I know you love the characters. But YOU (writers) asked me to do this! So please, no emails telling me how dumb I am for not realizing this show is fiction and that it’s not a police procedural. I know this. And yes, I like the show. Especially this episode. I must say this was one of the best yet. Maybe it was so good because Lanie only had two lines to deliver, and they were believable. Amazing!

– Beckett goes to the prison (a state prison not under the control of NYPD) and totally takes control of an emergency response team who’s mission is to raid Lockwood’s cell. She even gives the team the command to GO! Ridiculous. Those teams practice together as a team on a very regular basis. Each person has a specific duty and they operate as a unit. They would not allow an outsider to join them, especially as their leader. Besides, she has no authority inside a prison.

A bit of explanation regarding the prison part of the episode:

Ad Seg, where Lockwood was housed, is Administrative Segregation. That’s where they keep inmates who either need protection or they pose a threat to others. There are a few other reason prisoners are housed in ad seg, but these two are the major ones.

General Population – Where the majority of prisoners are housed and are allowed to mingle with other prisoners.

Collect Calls from prisoners – I believe it was Ryan who said Lockwood was making collect calls to a number that wouldn’t accept the calls. Most prisons require prisoners to submit a list of names—a phone list—and numbers of the people they’ll be calling during their incarceration. Authorities check the numbers to make sure they don’t belong to co-conspirators or victims, police officers, judges, etc., and those are the only numbers the inmates are allowed to call. The system does not allow random calls or calls to unapproved numbers. The calls are also monitored (randomly, or if officials have reason to monitor a specific inmate).

– Ryan and Esposito hand Castle a beer they’d been keeping cold in the evidence room refrigerator. Castle grimaces at the thought of what else is kept there, on ice. Sure, it happens. I’ve seen it in morgues as well – a six pack of Diet Coke sitting next to John Doe’s body. Or a box of warm doughnuts beside a brain bucket in the autopsy room.

– There was a bit of a problem with how things progressed when Montgomery “took the bullet” for Beckett. As tough as she is and she simply stood by while her captain was murdered? No way. And, this whole thing was so out of character for Montgomery. But, when you’ve got to get out of your contract, you take a bullet, right?

As for Beckett getting shot…you bet she had on a vest (remember, they were gunning for her). And you can take it to the bank that she conveniently won’t remember Castle’s words.

Montgomery’s funeral was nicely done, including the riderless horse. I remember the days of working plainclothes for years and years and then trying to squeeze into the old uniform for a special occasion. Well, let’s just say that Beckett and crew seemed to fit into theirs a little better than I did. I’m just saying…

 

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Castle: Pretty Dead

 

Miss Illinois is dead? Murdered? Strangled with her own sash? Say it ain’t so! Yes, the beauty queen’s premature demise was the case Beckett and crew were charged with solving this week.

Normally, I like a case with lots of twists and turns, especially when the twist comes at the end. But this episode had us worming around and through so many winding roads that I was almost dizzy before the final scene. Actually, there were too many twists. And, those twists, unfortunately, were without substance. I hate to say it, but they were simply weak (poorly written?) attempts to throw the viewer off base.  I knew the killer’s identity from the beginning. Anyone else?

Okay, on to the cop stuff and this will be easy because there wasn’t much of it. And something else was missing from this episode, but it was a welcome absence…NO LANIE! Hang on while I dance on the ceiling for a minute…

Okay, I’m done celebrating. Now, for the forensics set-up we were treated to another visit by Perlmutter, who, by the way, says the same goofy stuff as Lanie, but he delivers it in a believable manner. His character is much more realistic. And he’s likeable. Don’t get me wrong, Jones (Lanie) is a fine actor, she’s just playing the wrong part. She’s, so, so wrong for the M.E. role. But, lets move on.

– Perlmutter shows Beckett a black sequin found in the victim’s hair. Well, they make a big deal out of the clue and learn that it came from the dinner jacket worn by the emcee of the pageant. And Beckett makes an even bigger deal of it when she questions the emcee. “Explain how this sequin got in the victim’s hair.” Well, I could explain it for him. After all, they’d just watched a video where he and the victim were talking and he leaned over to whisper in her ear. AND, when he did her hair was against the jacket. Duh…

– Why was the victim’s father (and scores of other people) allowed to walk freely through the crime scene while the body was still there? And wouldn’t it be in better taste to interview the father in a location where he couldn’t see the body of his dead daughter being tended to and wheeled away by folks from the morgue?

The investigation was weak and a bit ho-hum, but this episode was all about Castle’s relationship with Alexis, which I’ll leave to Melanie. But I do want to mention two more things before I go.

First, my favorite line from the show came from Beckett. “He’s dropped more pills than a three-fingered pharmacist.”

Finally, I’d pay close attention to next week’s episode. Might be shocking.

Okay, Melanie. Take it away…

Melanie Atkins

I really didn’t think too much about PRETTY DEAD before tonight, because I’ve been so caught up in reading the flood of speculation about next week’s finale. And I doubt I’ll think much about it now, either, even though Perlmutter was the ME rather than Lanie, and I’m sure that made Lee happy. I found the episode to be funny, yet unremarkable… except for a few relationship tidbits:

• Alexis broke up with Ashley so he would pursue his dream of going to Stanford rather than going to school in NYC… and limiting himself just to stay close to her.

• Rick told Kate about the Alexis-Ashley breakup, and she sided with Alexis, telling him the girl was simply being practical. Then Rick said, “But what happens when she meets her soulmate but she doesn’t risk it because it’s not practical?” Kate just stared at him.

• All the relationship banter with Captain Montgomery as he tried to come up with a present for his wife for their 30th anniversary. Rick has lots of ideas, and Kate is amused. Even Roy gets in on the action by making a remark about Rick’s failed marriages. Nice.

• Ashley comes to the precinct to ask Rick to act as an advocate for him with Alexis; to convince her to take him back and try a long distance relationship in the fall when he goes to Stanford rather than to a school in NYC. The line that jumped out at me was when Ashley asked Rick, “Have you ever been crazy about someone who’s determined to push you away?” And Rick was speechless, because yes, he’s crazy about Kate, and she won’t let him get close. She keeps pushing him away.

• Rick’s talk with Alexis on Ashley’s behalf was very sweet. He tells her, “Life is a journey, and we can’t predict its outcome. Don’t be so focused on what’s right in front of you that you miss the whole picture.” This analogy turned out to be more case related rather than having to do with Rick and Kate’s relationship, but the father-daughter moment was nice.

• The looks Kate gave Rick toward the end of the show. Wow. Makes me wonder if she and Josh have already broken up. Speculation was that they might break up in this episode if they hadn’t, but I saw no sign of Dr. Motorcycle Boy tonight. He hasn’t been mentioned for a while. So who knows?

• Kate asked Rick if Alexis had made decision about Ashley, and he says, “She decided that it’s worth the risk, and she’s going to just keep showing up.” Kate smiles and says, “Good choice.” And they just stare at each other, knowing they’re actually talking about their own relationship instead. I think Kate has already ditched DMB, and she’s taking Royce’s letter (the one she read on the plane last week) to heart. What do you think?

I’m curious about Montgomery’s decision to retire and Ryan’s question about what they’ll do without him at the precinct. Would that be a little foreshadowing about what might happen next week? Just sayin’… I have a feeling that episode will be tough to watch. Where this one was light, that one is said to be dark and angsty.

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Castle: To Live And Die In L.A.

Was it worth the wait? Was this episode all the network promised? Did the magic of California bring Castle and Beckett together (you know what I mean)? Well, let’s see what Melanie has to say about the lovey-dovey stuff before I get into the legality of cops shooting unarmed people in the back. Take it away, Melanie…

With the long wait between original episodes, this one was hyped to within an inch of its life. Fans have been going crazy with speculation, especially after sneak peeks were released last week. I have to admit that I was anticipating more closeness between Beckett and Castle… nothing exactly earth shaking, but more than the rushed parts they gave us.

I know Lee wasn’t pleased with Beckett’s actions out of her own jurisdiction, and that part of the show didn’t thrill me either. I was more into the relationship aspects, though.

The major points that jumped out at me were:

• Rick was concerned about Kate’s reaction to Royce’s death.

• He booked a seat on the same flight with her to L.A. when she decided to go rogue, upgraded her to first class, and convinced her to stay in the suite he’d booked downtown.

• He provided her with a cover story, i.e. the Nikki Heat movie.

• The scene in the suite when the two of them had eye sex right there on the couch, and then Kate jumped and ran. That sneak peek killed me, because it stopped when Kate opened the door. So much speculation — then Rick wasn’t there when she came back out. Grrr! Still, she did make open the door. Amazing.

• Kate donned a swimsuit to lure their prey, a man named Ganz, to her side at his hotel pool, and ended up knocking Rick for a loop, too. The look on his face when she came out of the pool was priceless. I wanted to hand him a napkin to wipe off the drool.

• Kate poked him because he’d put himself in Ganz’s line of sight and caused her to rush her story… but then told him “I want to kiss you” when she found out he’d taken a picture of the list of Ganz’s recent calls. Rick looked as if he were ready to take her up on it.

• Royce’s letter to Kate. To me, this was the best part — when her mentor speaks from the grave, telling her: “And now for the hard part, kid. It’s clear that you and Castle have something real, and you’re fighting it. But trust me… putting the job ahead of your heart is a mistake. Risking our hearts is why we’re alive. The last thing you want is to look back on your life and wonder if only…” And then she turned her gaze on Rick as he slept.

Their relationship is moving forward, one baby step at a time. I liked that part, although I was kind of disappointed in the episode as a whole. Too much case, not enough great moments like the one on the couch with Rick and Kate. Just sayin’. Bring on the romance, please!

Okay, my turn. And I’ll be brief.

And I can be brief since most of this was filmed in LA., or should I say La-La Land, which is apparently where Lanie thought she was during the filming of the show. Yep, there was plenty of great Lanie nonsense (Lanie pictured above in her full M.E. attire) floating around the TV screen last night.

My favorite Lanie line of the week – “He was shot in the leg. Judging from the blood trail it must’ve broken the bone.” Gee, Lanie, I wish I’d known that broken leg bone blood was different than blood in other parts of the body, and in non-broken legs. Give me a “break!”

The whole “cop going rogue” thing is something you see in a lot of books, and now Beckett has done the same. Well, in reality (I know, this show is fiction) that sort of thing doesn’t happen. BUT, cops go to other jurisdictions all the time, and they do so as part of their investigations. They can visit with people, ask them questions, etc., just like they do back in their own territory. What they can’t do is legally arrest someone, because their police powers don’t travel with them, unless they’re federal officers. Officers normally check in with the locals to let them know they’re in town working on a case. And, the locals normally tag along because they know the area, the people, and for safety. Besides, it’s cop courtesy to let the local department know you’re out there poking around.

Of course, Beckett carried things to the extreme when she broke into someone’s house (she travels with lock picks?) and refused to play nice with the LAPD detective. In L.A., Beckett was merely a private citizen who could have been arrested for the B&E. But, that’s where more cop courtesy came into play. And, yes, the LA detective had every right and reason to call Beckett’s boss.

The only other tiny item I’m going to point out (Melanie covered everything nicely) is the thing about shooting a fleeing felon. The question comes up all the time, so here goes.

Can a police officer shoot a fleeing felon, even if he’s unarmed? And that’s what happened on the show last night. Beckett shot an unarmed suspect in the back as he ran away. Well, I am going to leave out the part about her being outside her jurisdiction when she shot the guy.

So, the answer to the question is a normal “law-type” answer…Yes and No.

Calibre Press summed up the two answers nicely in this article:

You cannot lawfully shoot a fleeing felon. True or False?

Surprise! The answer to this question is both true and false. You may lawfully shoot a

fleeing felon if certain conditions are met: Do you have probable cause to believe that a

felony has been committed and that the fleeing person did it? Is it a felony that involves

violence or the threat of violence? Does the suspect present a danger of violence or the

threat of violence to the public and/or other officers if not stopped? Was a warning given,

if practical? Did the suspect ignore or refuse to follow direction from you, if it was

practical to attempt verbal compliance? See Tennessee v. Garner, 471 U.S. 1 (1985).

 

Where the circumstances do not fit these conditions, you may not use deadly force to stop

a fleeing felon. The involvement of violence, threatened or actual, is key.

 

Calibre Press Street Survival Newsline

February 28, 2008 – Number 867

Now, were each of those conditions met last night? Maybe so, maybe no.

Could Beckett legally shoot the guy in the back as he ran away from her? Test your knowledge.

1. Did the suspect have to obey her order to stop (did she give the command to stop)? She’s not a police officer in L.A., right? Remember, she was NOT there, officially. Or was she acting as an officer since she was with the LAPD officers (even though she did NOT have permission to be there on behalf of the NYPD)?

2. Did she have actual probable cause to believe the suspect had committed a felony? If so, what was the PC?

3. Was there a continuing and actual threat of real danger to the public if she didn’t shoot him?

Finally, why wasn’t there some sort of investigation into Beckett shooting the suspect? Imagine what an LAPD officer would have to go through if they simply discharged a weapon, not to mention actually shooting someone. But, Beckett and crew were all smiles afterward as if it were simply another sunny California day.

And, for fun…

The movie version of Ryan and Esposito. Not even close…

 

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Castle: The Dead Pool

Sure, Lanie was on her usual Magical Mystery Tour, but even her foolishness couldn’t stop the fun in this week’s episode. After all, Poker Night was back and that’s always cool. And Castle even taught his fans how to break into a car using a blood pressure cuff. Yes, that is possible.

In fact, a special inflatable device called a pump wedge is actually designed specifically for the task of opening locked car doors. The inflatable bladder in the pump wedge is a bit sturdier than the one’s in the medical use devices. Oh, and a thief could easily pick one up for less than $40 (or they could steal one). Okay, back to the show.

Let’s get Lanie and her goofiness out of the way.

– She stated that someone placed a caustic substance over the victim’s mouth and then dumped him in the pool to drown. First of all, she’d have no way to determine that information in the field. Sure, there were blisters around the guy’s mouth, and chlorine exposure does cause that sort of thing, but how would she know the swimmer didn’t drink chlorine (or battery acid, or…) as a means of committing suicide? And she definitely wouldn’t know someone had dumped the guy in the pool to drown.

– Lanie was also pretty quick in determining the time of death by calculating the water and body temperatures.

Our good friend, author Jonathan E. Quist, wrote last night to fill me in on a few chlorine details. Here’s what he had to say:

When Castle and Becket confront the killer at the end of the episode, Beckett comments that they searched his hotel room and found his shirt “with chlorine on it–pure chlorine, the kind that killed Zack.”

First, basic chemistry, “pure chlorine” is a gas. If it was on the killer’s shirt, then they cut the hazmat cleanup scene. But no lab tech would have told Beckett “pure chlorine”. Well, except Lanie, perhaps.

Assuming they meant undiluted liquid pool chlorine, which has about three times the concentration of sodium hypochlorite as home laundry bleach, then a) the shirt would be gone (it would have holes in it before the last day in this timeline, so why is it still in the hotel room?) and b) the killer would have had chemical burns on body parts which were visible several times during the episode.

An Olympic-sized pool facility would likely be using chlorine gas as the sanitizer rather than liquid, though that is not 100 percent certain.

I give Lanie credit- she said “we won’t know for certain until we get him back to the shop”, but the body had been floating in a pool for several hours- there’s no way she could have determined the burns on the victim’s mouth were from a “caustic liquid”.

Yes, these may be geeky details, but they’re known to anyone who operates a backyard pool.

Thanks for the details, Jonathan.

Back to my ramblings…

– Lanie’s morgue is a one-stop shop. Why, this week she even tested the liquid in the vials found in the dead guy’s apartment and determined that they were indeed steroids. It would have been nice to have this sort of fantastic service back when I was solving cases. Instead, we actually had to use the services of laboratory scientists who analyzed chemicals and other substances. You know…chemists and other professionals. Something else really odd happened then, too. The medical examiners basically conducted autopsies and left the testing of “things” to the lab folks, since that wasn’t something they were trained to do.

Sure, M.E.’s use lab findings to help them determine cause of death. But they don’t stop mid-autopsy to run something through the Wayback Machine.

Anyway…

– Beckett interviews a murder suspect, a grown college man, with both his attorney and his father present.  Well, she shouldn’t have allowed his father to be in the room during the interview. And an attorney would never allow his/her client to to be subjected to that type of questioning unless he’d already been charged and had worked out some sort of deal with the prosecutor.

– The poker game was fantastic. And, like many of you, I’ve met both Dennis Lehane and Michael Connelly, so that made the scene even more fun.

Well, I thought the show was entertaining The criminal case was weak, but that wasn’t the focus of the episode. And I’d better leave the mushy stuff for Melanie to address.

I did ask the applause bears what they thought of this one, and here’s their reaction.

Oh, my favorite Castle line from the show:

“He’s a writer. How much trouble could he possibly be?”


One more thing, and this is for those of you who watch American Idol. Is it just me, or is Stefano moonlighting as a swim coach?

Melanie…are you there? I know you loved this one.

Melanie Atkins

Jealous Castle? Oh, yeah. Who knew the author would get so upset when his protégé asked Kate for help with the case in his next book? Seeing Rick being eaten alive by the green-eyed monster totally made my night. And after that last scene, my little shipper heart is going pitter-patter.

The early part of the episode was filled with great banter and many of Kate’s little hidden smiles at Rick’s antics. Then Alex showed up, and jealousy came into play.

Notable jealous moments:

• Rick complained to Alexis and Martha that Alex was trying to “steal his muse”.

• He tossed back the muffin he’d gotten from the basket after learning Alex had sent them to Kate, and liked the card that came with the muffins even less — namely because it said, “Thanks for last night.”

• Alex sent Kate a text about getting together again the next day, and Rick stopped in his tracks in the middle of the sidewalk. The look on his face spoke volumes.

• Montgomery mentions that Alex never seemed to tire of watching Kate, much like Rick, and that pushes all of Rick’s buttons. Jealous, much? Oh, yes.

• For revenge, Rick uses poker night with fellow authors Michael Connelly and Dennis LeHane to lure Alex away from Kate the next night… and helps them rake the kid over the coals. What an initiation. Tee hee!

The best part of the episode to me, though, was the end. Can you say Major Shipper Moment? With a knowing twinkle in her eye, Kate pushed Rick about being upset about Alex wanting to spend time with her until he broke and admitted he was jealous; that he didn’t like sharing her with another writer. Finally, one of them revealed his true feelings!

And to my surprise… Kate agreed to not see Alex anymore. She claimed she was now a “one writer girl”. Wow. This was epic! And she even gave Alex to the boys for good measure. He didn’t seem to mind hanging around with Esposito and Ryan, either. Great touch.

We got a dose of much needed continuity, when Kate quoted back Rick’s line from the ambulance in Knockdown: “Always.”

But the look after that between Rick and Kate… Did I mention that my little shipper heart went pitter-patter? All in all, I loved this episode. Not because of the case, certainly. (Case? What case?) But because of Rick’s jealousy and the end that made me squee like a little kid. Thank you, Andrew Marlowe.

Oh, and FYI: This is the last new episode until May 2 — and the delightful May sweeps. The next three episodes that will wind up season three should prove to be even more memorable. Can’t wait!

 

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Castle: Slice Of Death

 

Was it just me, or were you, too, salivating for a good slice of pizza after watching this episode? Yeah, well, I also found myself salivating for something more from the show—something new! I’m bored. Each week, Castle, Beckett, and the rest of the crew do the same things…over and over and over and over again. There’s a body, a few witty one-liners, Ryan and Esposito trot on camera to deliver a very handy clue at just the right moment, and Lanie, well, she’s Lanie…consistently and monotonously goofy.

I’m pretty certain there’s a boilerplate script floating among the writers who take turns filling in the blanks each week. The boilerplate theory becomes apparent when I look back over my notes for the past three seasons.

In the beginning, I often took five or six pages of notes, scribbling furiously to keep up with the actors. As time passed, the note-taking became easier and easier. Why? Because I learned the pattern. Yep, the show has a consistent pattern (this happens, followed by that, and then this, and BINGO, there’s your killer). Last night’s note-taking—only a half page.

Sure, I still like the show, mainly because Fillion’s fun to watch. Stana Katic has some pretty good moments as well. I also like the Ryan and Esposito characters, but I’d like to see more from them. Simply popping in the room like Jack-in-the Boxes to deliver a bit of news to Beckett is really getting old. And speaking of getting old…how about the constant alluding-to-Josh thing? Just write him out of the show and get on with it. It’s no longer working as a teaser. Instead, it’s become an irritant, kind of like Dana Delany as the FBI agent. Well, maybe it’s not that bad, but close. (I won’t mention her new show and how horrible it is).

Anyway, we have a dead guy in a pizza oven…

I could just post this picture and be done with it, because you know what’s coming, right?

Lanie – “Based on the oven setting and the body’s core temperature, I’d say he went in no sooner than 2am. The stab wound in his chest says he was dead when he went in.”

Well, that all sounds so nice, but there’s no way she could tell, in the restaurant, that the stab wound is what killed the crispy little guy. And I won’t even discuss the temperature stuff other than to say…ARGHHH!!!!!!

Besides, there was all sorts of talk of cremation associated with the pizza oven. No way. A pizza oven doesn’t get hot enough for cremation. I believe pizzas are cooked at temps somewhere around 500 degrees F. Bodies are cremated at temps between 1,700 – 1,900 degrees (I think). So, at 500 degrees for three hours (which is approximately how long the body had been in the oven when it was first discovered) the body would be getting close to medium well to well done, right? I know, I’m being a little silly, but the body certainly would not reach cremation temperatures in a pizza oven.

– Beckett and crew track the dead guy’s movements on the night he was murdered by following his credit card usage. The one transaction that led them to him was the very one that couldn’t have helped find him. The victim inserted his card into the machine but didn’t complete the transaction (he was killed) so the device swallowed his card, which is a built-in security-type thing so the next person in line can’t grab your card if you forget it. So…this meant that Beckett would not have had the card in hand to track it’s usage, at least not as quickly as they did. Good idea, but it would take quite a while to get the necessary paperwork that would allow snooping into the bank records. And zooming in on the handwriting from a very grainy ATM video…yeah, right. Again, good idea, and I’ve tried it in the past, and crimes have been solved using those videos, but…

And the crook of the week? She was the obvious choice the moment we first saw her.

Alexis, Alexis, Alexis…I like the father/daughter moments because I can relate to them. But…for me, these are too juvenile for someone as bright as Alexis.

And why can’t the police be smart enough to solve a case for once? I know, if they were as smart as the writer the show would be called Beckett, instead of Castle.

Oh well, that’s it for me. Again, it was a solid, fun show, but I knew it would be. After all, they’re all they same, aren’t they?

Melanie? Are you there?

What a fun episode! I really liked this one, except for the lack of any genuine Beckett-Castle moments. Rick did ask Kate for advice when Alexis faced a “friend” crisis, but other than that, the show pretty much centered on the case. Normally that bugs me, but tonight the writing flowed so well I decided to forgive that little bump in the road. At least we had no mention of Josh… and Kate and Rick continued their awesome theory building.

Can’t wait for next week, when the romantic storyline — and the poker game with Castle’s author buddies — return. Woot!

 

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Castle: Law And Murder

Well, another episode has come and gone. And this week Caskett (insert appropriate eye roll here) and crew spent the entire hour working a case involving a poisoned juror. Unfortunately, for those of us with investigative minds, the case and killer were pretty predictable. However, that’s sometimes how it goes in the real world. But when I’m watching TV cops, I like to see a bit more twisting and turning before I know the identity of the killer. In this episode, I had him pegged as soon as he appeared on screen.

Okay, this review won’t take long since there really wasn’t a lot to talk about as far as police procedure, but, and you’d better sit down for this one, I have to point out a few good things about Lanie.

For the first time, or so it would seem, the writers did a little forensic homework. Therefore, Lanie actually sounded as if she’d at least walked across a med school campus at some point in her life. Here’s what she had to say about the dead juror (Oh, and she waited until post autopsy to determine cause of death. Nice touch for a change).

– The guy died from cyanide poisoning, and Lanie made this determination using a color test (Cyantesmo test paper).

FYI – The strip is a preliminary test. The confirmation testing would be conducted by a toxicologist in a lab, not by the M.E. Still, it’s a one-hour show, and they needed to get to the point, so they had Lanie report the finding (Of course, she could have said toxicology ran the test and reported to her, but…). Anyway, for the writers out there, Cyantesmo test paper is normally a pale green strip that turns blue in the presence of hydrocyanic acid. The finding is then confirmed using gas chromatography.

BUT…as always, Lanie would have needed a reason to have the victim tested for cyanide poisoning since that’s not something that’s on a normal tox screen. And guess what? She did. She told Beckett that she detected the smell of bitter almonds on the victim. Also, the victim presented with “pink lividity.” Both could be indicators of cyanide poisoning.

So this was good information. But the writers couldn’t stop there. Nope. They couldn’t stand having Lanie sound as if she were a real medical examiner. They followed up with this one…

– Beckett asked Lanie how the poison was introduced and Laine responded with, “Brownish stains in his mouth indicated he recently had coffee. Maybe it was there.” WHAT? So brown stains in someone’s mouth means they’d just gulped down a cup of Starbuck’s best brew? What about tea, a cigarette, or a chocolate doughnut? What about anything that could leave a brown stain???

– Beckett, during an interview with a particularly tough-looking suspect, tells the guy, “Sit down before I make you sit down.” Well, that type of statement only works if you’ve got the a** to back it up. She’s tough, but in this case, I don’t think that would have been the case. I believe this guy would have mopped the floor with both Beckett and Castle. Still, I can see every cop in the world trying it. Part of the job is putting on the tough-guy suit and playing the game.

– Castle made the statement that most poisonings were committed by female killers. I believe that’s an accurate statement. Shootings are male crimes for the most part. But I’ve seen women who were pretty good at slicing up people with knives, so that method could go to either sex.

– The scene where Ryan and Esposito cornered a guy in a closet was pretty good until the man hit the floor. That’s when we heard the detectives’ weapons making all sorts of clicking noises, as if the officers had just racked the slides, or something. That DOES NOT happen, folks. Please don’t write it that way in your stories. Pointing a firearm at someone does not make it click, snap, crackle, or pop.

– I believe it was Ryan who told a probationer/parolee that he’d have him back in prison before roll call. FYI – Normally, that process is called “count,” not roll call. They don’t actually do a roll call. Instead, corrections officers conduct “head counts” several times each day.

– Am I alone here, or does anyone else want to see more of Ryan and Esposito? These guys should be conducting interviews, etc.

– I liked the fingerprint-on-the-seatback-button idea. That’s the stuff that breaks cases. Good thinking here.

– Oh, and the crooked DA… Who didn’t see that coming? Besides, the cops don’t work for the DA.

All in all, I’d say this episode was just okay. Sure, it was solid, but nothing more. No “WOW” factor.

So I guess it beat watching Sanford and Son reruns.

Well, I’d better leave something for my review partner to discuss. So, take it away, Melanie…

To me, this seemed like a filler episode, with the plot dwelling mostly on the case, but I enjoyed it. Plenty of twists and turns.

Nothing earth shaking happened between Kate and Rick, however, although they did manage a little theory building, a few shared smiles, and Kate chastised Rick for tracking Alexis via her phone.

The sweet scene farther along in the show when Alexis came into the precinct and she and Rick ironed things out made both me and Kate smile. She seems to like seeing Rick in “daddy” mode… the time when he’s the most genuine.

The “Forbidden Planet” framing device was a nice touch. Rick begged first Alexis and then Martha to go with him to see the movie at the beginning of the show, but they both declined. Then at the end, Beckett admitted that she’s a fan of the movie and plans to go since they’ve solved the case — sans Josh, who’s on shift — and this thrills Rick, but he doesn’t let on that he loves the movie, too. He lets her think he’s never seen it. So she insists he go along… and with a hidden grin, he agrees, even asking her to go for burgers at Remy’s afterward. Sly dog. She doesn’t agree to that right away, but who knows what might happen off camera? <smirk>

Next week’s show looks interesting… but the one I really can’t wait for comes later, during May sweeps. The big trip to L.A. for a case and a visit to the Heatwave movie set.

 

Castle: One Life To Lose

After a couple of weeks off the show was back in full swing with a visit to the set of a fictitious soap opera called Temptation Lane. And Fillion probably felt right at home in this episode since he paid his soap opera dues way back when on One Life To Live.

The show opened with the body of the week (the soap’s head writer) falling from a closet onto the set during the taping of the show. The poor woman had been killed with a fire ax, which, to me, looked more like a prop from Who Framed Roger Rabbit? Even so, it fit perfectly with this light and humorous episode.

But…(yep, here it comes) Lanie had to open her mouth, spilling the usual flow of stupidity. So I’ll get that out of the way first. REMEMBER, I only point this stuff out so writers, and others, won’t think this is how it is in real life. You guys asked me to do this so there’s no need to complain about my Lanie-bashing! Okay, here goes…

Lanie, while displaying enough cleavage for three women, squats beside the body and says, “Spinal cord was severed with an ax.”

Well, I guess she’d brought along a pair of those x-ray specs you can order from the back of comic books, because that’s the only way she could have known the extent of the injuries at this point. And she didn’t stop there, continuing with, “Upon contact (with the ax, I guess) her lungs filled with blood causing her to drown.” WHAT??????????? Boy, those x-ray specs are really worth all one-hundred pennies. In fact, every detective and pathologist should run out and buy a pair today!

WAIT, there’s more. Lanie says, “Based on the CSU sweep (I didn’t know those folks reported to her) the victim was killed here. The killer cleaned up the blood spatter and then shoved her (the victim) in the closet.”

How (shaking my head vigorously from side-to-side) would they be able to tell where the victim was killed if there was no spatter? THAT’S what they’d use to determine the position of the killer and of the victim.

Enough of Lanie, and believe me, I’ve had enough Lanie “VooDoo M.E.” to last a lifetime. I did like how Beckett and crew eliminated suspects as a means of reaching their goal. That’s normally how it’s done, unless the clues are really obvious. So, good job there. The rest of the investigation was a yawner. In fact, I pegged the killer from moment one, almost as if she had a flashing red arrow hanging above her head throughout the show. However, this episode really wasn’t about  the murder. It was meant to be fun and it was. Lots of great one-liners, and lots of Fillion’s silly side. Beckett was fun, too. Well, with the exception of the phone call at the end. That’s getting really old. But I’ll leave the mushy stuff to Melanie. And speaking of Melanie…what’d you think of this week’s show?

This nod to Nathan Fillion’s days on One Life to Live reminded me why I love the show in the first place: snappy banter, inside jokes, and heated (though small) Castle-Beckett moments.

• Castle started with the banter and flirted with Kate, and she gave it right back throughout the episode.

• Rick nailed Kate as a “shipper” — someone who invests in a relationship on a TV show (That would also be me, but we’re talking about Kate and Temptation Lane… right?)

• Castle mentioned the name “Esplanie” for the pairing of Lanie and Esposito… a highlight that cracked me up because that name for the couple first came up on my favorite fan site. (Along with “Caskett” for the Castle-Beckett ship. Creepy, yes… but it fits.)

• Beckett and Castle built theory together in classic fashion. Too cute, especially when Ryan and Esposito called them on it.

• A fabulous Castle-Beckett scene at the end of the show after Rick gives Kate a signed picture from the cast of Temptation Lane. The kind of scene that makes my little Caskett heart go pitter-patter… only to be interrupted by a phone call from Josh (Dr. Motorcycle Boy) to Beckett. Worst. Timing. Ever!

All in all, I enjoyed this episode that took us back to the Castle basics. Can’t wait for next week, when a juror drops dead in the jury box.

And just for fun

Castle: Countdown

What can be said about this episode of Castle? Well, not a lot by me. There was very little police procedure to screw up. And Castle has completely taken over all investigations, solving every single case that comes along. Seems that Beckett and crew have suddenly become so incompetent that they have to rely on the investigative skills of a mystery writer to save New York from the evil-doers. So that makes it difficult to evaluate the police procedure since he’s not a cop. Therefore, my role this week was easy, and brief. But Melanie’s going first again so I’ll turn things over to her. Melanie…

Melanie Atkins

Well, last week Lee wasn’t pleased with the show, and I was. I don’t know what he thinks this week, at least not yet, but this time I’m not a happy camper. Marlowe turned the tables on us, and I don’t like it.

Yes, I enjoyed the freezer scenes, the theory building, and the search for the bomb. All of that had a bit of a “movie” feel. Not bad.

But seriously…what in the name of everything holy is Kate still doing with Josh? Okay, sure. He’s a doctor. I thought he might play a part after they were rescued from the cooler, if his plane didn’t take off for Haiti… but I also thought Kate would kick him to the curb after that. I mean, seriously! Is she blind? Can’t she see that Rick loves her?

I have hope, though, that she might eventually get a clue, as evidenced by these points:

• The way Rick looked at Kate when she went to Josh after they talked near the ambulance. He was stunned. Sucker-punched. Had the wind knocked out of his sails. Use whatever cliché you want – it hurt.

• The brokenhearted look he gave her after he sent Alexis and Martha to the Hamptons. He wasn’t just thinking about them; he was also picturing her with Josh and thinking that he’d never have a chance with her.

• The way Kate watched Rick as he built theory with Fallon while they were searching for the bomb. I’m convince that her heart wants him, but her head won’t let her admit it because he’s Rick Castle.

• They almost died together – again – after they found the bomb, and they shared a delicious hug afterwards. Sure, they were celebrating being alive, but it was sweet nonetheless. They’ve shared so much together. Surely something should click soon.

• During their celebration over beers at the precinct, Esposito said, “You guys don’t know how lucky you are.” And Rick looked at Kate and said, “Actually, I do.” That look says it all. He’s in love with her. Everybody in the room picked up on it… except, apparently, Kate. Or maybe she just ignored it because she’s scared.

• Before Josh (the ass) showed up at the end, Rick was about to ask Kate out… or something. Maybe he wanted her to go for a drink. We’ll never know, because he apparently saw Josh arrive and changed what he was going to say – a mirror image of what happened in last year’s season finale when Kate changed what she was going to say (telling Rick she’d go to the Hamptons with him) when Gina showed up.) And yes, this hurt just as much. Aarrgghh!!

• Josh took Kate in his arms, but she was looking at Rick as he walked away — even though he kept his eyes averted and never looked at her again. I guess seeing them together was just too hard to take.

So yes, I still have hope. But this hurts almost as much as watching A Deadly Game at the end of last season. I hope Marlowe will take pity on us shippers and ditch Dr. Motorcycle Boy at the first opportunity. I’m ready to buy him a ticket to Haiti myself.

Melanie…This episode actually made me miss Lanie Parish. Why? Because it was a snooze fest for me. Boring. Boring. Boring. Your hero, Marlowe, seems to have let us down this time. And, as I said in the opening paragraph, there wasn’y a lot of police procedure involved in this hour of…whatever it was. But…

I think the DHS agent was written as a hard-nosed guy that we were supposed to dislike. But I didn’t. Actually, he ended up playing a decent part. I just wish he’d have just that ***hole in the interrogation room. At least that might have provided a teeny bit of tension in what was supposed to be a nail-biter of an episode.

– DHS agent tells the captain to get him a list of all the significant events going on in the city. What? Where is he from, Happyland, Idaho? They’re in New York City for goodness sake. The task of listing every event going on there would be like having Lanie Parish say something intelligent about forensics…not happening.

– How about how Ryan and Esposito found Beckett and Castle? In a city the size of New York, those two searched places they thought Beckett and Castle would go (yeah, right), and then they saw her car, went inside the right building, saw a light in the storage container, and voilà, there were the two human popsicles. How could they see a light in a container that was sealed tightly enough to be used as a freezer? It would have been much more believable had a patrol officer found the car while doing what they do…patrolling.

– Why was Josh working from an ambulance? Isn’t he a doctor…a miracle worker? Wouldn’t the paramedics who actually would work there be the right people to treat the sick and injured in the field? And…even if Josh did need the extra money, what are the chances that he’d be in that ambulance, in that part of the city, responding to that call?

– Beckett tells her crew that patrol units located the crook’s missing cell phone in a dumpster. Yeah, that could happen. In a city the size of New York, how many dumpsters do you think they’d have to search to find a tiny cell phone? It would be difficult to search one dumpster and be lucky enough to find a phone under all the garbage. Besides, did every single patrol officer stop what they were doing to paw through dumpsters?

– I quickly grew weary of Castle pointing out every single clue and case-solving aspect, including the ID theft of the soldier. For a split second there, the DHS agent and Beckett and crew looked like the Three Stooges while Castle explained how the ID theft would have occurred, and why. Something a rookie would have known two days BEFORE entering a police academy.

– And then there’s the scene where everyone chases the bad guy down the street. Well, they catch the guy, draw their weapons, and begin yelling the usual, “Hands up!” sort of commands. BUT, the suspect was standing directly between Beckett and the DHS guy, who were both pointing the pistols at the slimebag’s chest. Can you say CROSSFIRE? Had either, or both of them fired their weapon(s) there was a good chance the round(s) could have passed through the bad guy’s body, killing both him and Beckeet and DHS guy. Not to mention that Castle was standing next to the suspect AND an innocent civilian looky-loo stood just to Beckett’s right.

– And pulling out ALL the wires from the bomb? I’m not even going to address that nonsense.

Needless to say, I didn’t like this episode. Not at all. The cast is far better than the writing of this one. When the show ended, my wife made a comment that summed it up nicely. She said, “After that, it would be difficult for future episodes to ‘underdo’ this one.”

Castle: Setup

 

This week’s episode was billed as a nail-biter. A real edge-of-the-seat-sitter. Maybe it would have been had I not been watching for the police procedure so you writers won’t make the same mistakes we saw this week. But from where I sat…well, I’m going to go last this week. I need time to calm down. Lanie…puhleeze…you’re killing me.

Melanie, what’d you think of the show? I know you’ve been anxiously awaiting this one.

Melanie Atkins

I’ve been waiting for this episode, and the next one, for weeks. Ever since I first read the hype on the fansite I frequent. Everything I read pointed toward two great episodes with great action and some intense Beckett-Castle interaction, and I was afraid I might be disappointed. Luckily, however, I was wrong. Sure, most of the delicious Beckett-Castle goodness is yet to come, as was evidenced in the previews for next week, but we got what we needed: the Setup.

I seriously can’t wait for Countdown, the second half of this two-parter, which airs next Monday. It was written by Andrew Marlowe, god of all things Castle, so I have no doubt that it will rock. Woohoo! I love this show. Okay, I got that out of my system. ; )

On with the romance recap:

• Kate is obviously unhappy early on by a series of texts and calls that culminate in a visit to the precinct by Josh, her current significant other. When he leaves, she snaps at Ryan, and Castle notices. He questions her about Josh’s visit, and she skirts the issue.

• Once Kate and Rick are stuck in quarantine with their lives on the line, however, she comes clean and tells him that Josh is leaving for Haiti on another Doctors Without Borders mission. Apparently her relationship with Dr. Motorcycle Boy, as Castle calls him, has lost its gleam. At first she liked that Josh was so busy and traveled a lot. It allowed her to “keep one foot out the door”, so to speak, and that was good. Now, though, she wants someone who can be there for her, someone who needs her, too. Someone who will dive into a relationship with her. Rick starts to speak up, to tell her that he can be that guy, when they’re rudely interrupted and let out of quarantine. Ack!

• In true Castle-Beckett fashion, after they’re are kicked off the case for investigating outside the lines during a search for the bomb and are sent home, they continue to work the case off the grid and wind up getting locked in a giant freezer together… thus the “setup” for next week…

Methinks we’re in for some intense Kate-Rick bonding in Countdown. And I also believe I smell a Josh-Beckett break up in the works. I mean, seriously… they set it up perfectly. Bye, bye, Dr. Motorcycle Boy. I, for one, will be happy to see you go.

Okay, my turn to get something out of my system.

Melanie, were we watching the same show? Castle, right? The one where mystery writer Rick Castle, a civilian, was permitted to remain on a case that involved national security—a dirty BOMB? The same show where the medical examiner looked at a hole in a victim’s forehead and immediately knew it was caused by a 9mm round? The very show where a detective (Beckett) was removed from a case but continued to work it on her own (a huge pet peeve about novels, by the way…it DOES NOT happen!).

Before I point out the many things wrong with the police procedure, I have to agree with Melanie about the scene where Castle nearly bares his soul to Beckett. That one was priceless. And it was one of those scenes where Fillian tells the story with his facial expressions. No dialog needed at all to know what was on his mind.

Anyway, back to the deed at hand…police procedure and forensics. Unfortunately, we start with Lanie. Grrr…

– Lanie marks the time of death (TOD) at precisely 11:15 because that was the time on the victim’s watch when it stopped working. She had no way of knowing the watch stopped when the guy fell and died. For all she, or anyone else knew, the watch could’ve stopped ten years ago, but the guy continued to wear it for sentimental reasons. I’ve already addressed the 9mm round to the head, so I’ll move on to her next dumb comment, where she stated that someone broke the victim’s fingers, one at a time. What, were his fingers equipped with timers and video recorders? Because there is no way she could have determined this. No way.

– Esposito commented that the cab driver, according to his GPS software, made a stop and left the motor running. I’ll turn this one over to you guys. Does GPS software have the capability to record whether or not the engine is running while a vehicle is stationary? I haven’t seen one that does.

– I now know the name of Beckett’s favorite TV show…CSI. This was quite easy to figure out, especially when she searched the storage unit by flashlight when there was a perfectly nice 4′ fluorescent light fixture hanging overhead. They seem to favor using flashlights on CSI, even in daylight. Well, TURN ON THE LIGHTS people! That’s how real cops do it.

– Why was Beckett wearing a radiation detector? Standard police equipment? Nope.

– The DHS guy who came in and took over the investigation, and the entire NYPD, allowed Castle to continue working on a federal case that involved a dirty bomb. No way that would happen, AND…there’s no way the captain and a handful of plainclothes detectives would respond to a truck containing a bomb. That’s the job of the bomb squad/hazardous materials unit. If they did, they certainly wouldn’t run up to the truck and fling open the back door without first checking to see if that action would detonate the explosive device.

By the way, why was there only one federal officer sent to handle something this large? Don’t they travel in herds when working high-profile cases?

– I was glad to see Castle using the department computers to trace the bad guy’s money trail. That’s about the only thing left in the entire department that he, as a civilian, hadn’t done.

– Castle made a great statement concerning hard-working writers. “Writers work so hard making the details right.”

– Beckett allows Castle to meet with the Syrian diplomat to discuss the case… Do I need to address this nonsense? I didn’t think so. Next.

– I mentioned that the DHS guy removed Beckett and Castle from the task force, yet they continued to investigate the foreign, killer terrorists who’ll stop at nothing to murder anyone and everyone. And Beckett and Castle chose to continue, alone. I have one more thing to say about this. NO!

Lastly, I have to bring up the bomb. It’s sort of a character, too. Right? Well, I found it almost comical that the terrorists were thoughtful enough to label their “blowup-the-entire-city-of-New York” bomb as radioactive. They were also kind enough to include a radioactive placard/logo on the device. I guess they didn’t want anyone to get hurt…

I wish the writers had been that thoughtful when they dropped those police procedure and forensic bombs into our living rooms.

How long, I wonder, will it be before we begin to hear of the “Castle Effect” in courtrooms across the country? Will jurors soon begin to demand to see Lanie’s Voodoo-style of forensics? I know I’m already hearing writers ask questions, or doubt an actual expert’s advice with a response that begins with…”But Rick Castle said…” Or, “That’s not how Kate Beckett did it.” And, “Beckett didn’t need a search warrant.”

It’s only a matter of time. Only a matter of time. Sigh…

Castle: The Final Nail

Castle and Beckett find themselves on opposite sides of the aisle in this somewhat boring episode. The prime suspect in the murder-of-the-week just happened to be Castle’s old school chum, Damian “Somebody” (I don’t recall his last name. That’s how interested I was in this episode). Beckett and crew pegged the guy as suspect because, well, he was the husband of the victim and he had the motive for doing so…money. Damian was also a prime suspect in the murder of his own father over two decades ago. Coincidence? Beckett thinks not and she’s chomping at the bit to put Damian behind bars. Castle, on the other hand, is firmly convinced his old pal is innocent and does his best to get him off the hook.

Unfortunately, for the first time since I started watching and reviewing this show during the opening season, Nathan Fillian fell off his A game for a few minutes while trying to protect his friend from Beckett’s wrath. The scenes where he insisted upon his friend’s innocence were very forced and totally out of character for the actor. Of course, he’s such a wonderful actor no one would ever hold this tiny faux pax against him. In fact, I place the blame on the writer, not the actor. And that’s been the problem with the M.E. character, too. And we were certainly blessed this week in that we didn’t hear any of that nonsense. See how easily the M.E. stuff was handled by a few seconds briefing from a patrol officer at the scene? Now that was a breath of fresh air for a change. I’ll say it once more…Tamala Jones is a wonderful actor who’s forced to read horrible lines. Not her fault. Anyway, Fillian has nothing to worry about. He could appear on screen and not say a word and his fans would still love him.

Okay. Now for the murder. The victim. Hmm… She was popped in the head many times with what appeared to be a battery powered 16d nail gun, one that’s normally used for construction framing—like when you’re adding a new room with new walls, floors, and ceiling. That type of building. That’s sort of heavy-duty work. Therefore, the gun is  also quite heavy (I own a couple). It’s even heavier when it’s loaded with a full strip of nails. To make the gun activate and drive a nail, the part where the nail comes out must be firmly pressed against some sort of surface (yes, a head would work). So, after seeing the actual killer in this show, and seeing her small and dainty frame, including her hands, I have to wonder how she’d have held the heavy nail gun while struggling with the victim and still manage to press the nail gun tightly against the woman’s head long enough to activate it. AND, she’d have to know how to work the darn thing. It’s not an out-of-box type tool.

These two guys—Ryan and Esposito—have certainly come a long way since this show first aired. They’re now two characters with their own identities who play their roles very well. And they’re funny, too. I actually laughed out loud last night (one of the two or three good moments in the entire show) when Castle and Beckett were arguing and Ryan asked, “What’s going on?”

Esposito’s reply, “Mom and Dad are fighting.”

Hilarious.

– Beckett interviewed the suspect at one point during the show. The interview started out pretty good with her asking good questions, playing tough cop, etc. But it quickly fell apart, as if the writer simply got tired of writing and quit. Maybe her phone rang and she lost her place in the script when she hung up. Who knows? But we’ve seen this sort of thing before from the writer of this episode, Moira Kirkland.

– Castle is allowed to visit with his friend in lockup. And he begins to question the guy. No way. No how. In real life, as off-base as it is, he’d be considered an “agent” of the department (I don’t mean that he’s like a secret agent, merely someone acting on the behalf of the police department), therefore, he’d have to abide by the same rules as the cops. See, the suspect views him as part of the official investigation, and he is. So, an attorney would have a field day with any agent of the department asking questions without Miranda because the answers to those questions would certainly be reported back to the police and held against him. Well, that among many other reasons why he wouldn’t be allowed back there. Safety is a big one. Remember, the guy is a suspected murderer.

Okay, so now Castle is running the investigation? It would seem so since he up and walked out of the department carrying a box of evidence from an open murder case, stating, “I’m going to solve this one…” Please…

Beckett confronts Castle’s friend (the guy she suspects of murder) alone, in his home. No back up? She thinks the guy is a dangerous killer. Even Batman takes Robin with him when he’s meeting with the Joker.

– Once again, we followed a show all the way to the end, watching a trail of clues leading to a suspect, in this case, Castle’s school friend, only to have a totally new person pop up as killer. Well, this lady was introduced earlier in the show, but only as a secondary character. There was not a single clue leading to her involvement at all. Very disappointing to the viewers. As they say, “We were robbed.” Viewers (and readers) like to work the case with the detective, hoping they’ll solve it before the authorities do. Well, that can’t happen when the killer is dumped on us in the last seconds of the show.

I hate to say it, because I like this show, but the only really satisfying part of this episode for me was at the end when Castle and Beckett were walking down the street talking about having a drink. Why was this scene my favorite? Because I knew the show was ending.

How about you, Melanie? What’s your take on The Final Nail?

Melanie Atkins

Hi, Lee. Thanks for asking me to blog again on the romance part of the show. Not much on the forensic front in this episode; at least, nothing much that I could see. Most of it dealt with trust issues – between Beckett and Castle, Castle and his friend, Damien Westlake, and Westlake and his wife and the other players in their circle of friends and frenemies.

• As you already know, Rick and Kate fought over the likelihood of Westlake’s guilt—in front of a suspect, thereby undermining Kate’s authority—and this infuriates her. She sends Rick home, leaving him in a quandary. He ends up apologizing to Kate after a heart to heart talk with Martha, and she lets him back on the case. Still, who does Rick side with? His old friend, or Beckett?

• It’s obvious that Kate doesn’t like being on that opposite side of the case from Rick. She also admires his persistence and staunch loyalty to Westlake. And when evidence that might exonerate his friend turns up, she tells Westlake, “Richard Castle believes in you. And I believe in him.”

Whoa! This is major—and a step up from Episode 13, Knockdown, when Kate told Detective Ragland that Rick is someone she trusts. Slowly but surely, little by little, Rick Castle is becoming her best friend and confidant. The man she turns to when the going gets tough. The man she can’t live without. No, she’s not to that point yet—but it’s coming.

• Another twist sends them back to Westlake in regard to his father’s murder, and we hear them say their patented line in unison: “I think I know who the killer is.” I’m sure Lee covered this, so I’m not going into the case here. My focus is on Kate and Rick. They are so in sync—and the look they exchange when the elevator doors open is hot enough to melt steel.

Yes, ladies and gentlemen. Forget Josh. Rick and Kate are on the threshold of a relationship that will sizzle and burn. They’ll fight like they did tonight sometimes—who doesn’t? But just think about the heat they’ll generate when they make up!

Stay tuned for a blockbuster two-parter that makes up the next two episodes. I’ve read some spoilers, and all I can say is WOW. I can’t wait. ; )

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Meet Your 2011 Instructors

Denene Lofland received a Ph.D. in Pathology, with an emphasis in microbiology, from the Medical College of Virginia. As a former biotech company director, Denene managed successful clinical projects that resulted in FDA approval for two new antimicrobial drugs for the treatment of pneumonia and cystic fibrosis. She also supervised several projects, including government-sponsored research which required her to maintain a secret security clearance.

A renowned scientist, Denene is known for her expertise in DNA, bioterrorism, and new drug discovery. She has published several articles in a variety of scientific journals and was recently asked to contribute to the thirteenth edition of Bailey and Scott’s Diagnostic Microbiology.

Denene is currently a professor at Armstrong Atlantic State University.